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Author: angel_eyes9701
ASL Info:    24 F Salem, OR
Elite Ratio:    3.62 - 19 /33 /14
Words: 256
Class/Type: Misc /Misc
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A new love interest that has me "twiterpated" or on cloud 9 however you want to describe it


With every second that passes
I begin to feel more for you
Just waiting to hear your voice
It's all I want to do

I find myself looking at my phone
To see if I missed your call
Checking my email constantly
To see if you've been on at all

I know that right now is not the time
That some things are just not right
But I feel I can let go with you
I know that with you, things will be alright

I feel safe with you already
I feel I can really count on you
How can this be, tell me
I barely even know you

But this week has been so crazy
The things we've already talked about
The feeling that you already know me
All my secrets, inside out

I don't know where this will take us
If we even get to start
Just know that day by day
Your slowly winning my heart

I find myself, wanting to please you
To make you laugh just one more time
I cant believe I am saying this
But I really wish you were mine

I want to open up to you
I want to see where this might go
I am scared to love again
Though I am pretty sure you already know

Something in me wants to take the chance
Something is telling me go ahead
So I close my eyes and think of you
Finally happy, I go to bed

Submitted on 2007-09-10 12:15:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  this is pretty, and i like it, but i dont know if this is realistic at all...a week?

well, everyone is different
i think you executed this piece really well
good job

i hope it works out for you!
| Posted on 2007-09-10 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]

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