Bring me down
Waste my time
Make me wish
That I was something
That I'm not
Don't get me wrong
These are times when I feel indifferent
Oooh ooh ooh (it sounds nice w/ music he he)
Taste my lips
Drink my cries
Trust with heart
In all my lies
That bring refuge
To my semi truth
Label me sayer of sooth
Must I go on being only
Semi Sweet
Cuz I want to belong
To a web of strange feelings
From love
I told you once
I'm close to dark
A plaintiff confused
About her heart
Are we golden
Shall I kiss your feet
Or twist the springs
Beneathe our sheets
Of love
Ooo oooo
Must I go on being only
Semi sweet
Cuz I want to belong
To a web of strange feelings
Must I go on being only
Semi sweet
Cuz I want to belong
To a web of strange feelings
From love, from love
From love..
It's fine for me, but you might want to divide it up for the sake of other readers who need the conventions of verse, chorus, verse, chorus, bridge and etc... It may be a good idea to get this recorded and post it on a my space music page so that people can hear it with music and make a better assessment of whether or not it is a good song.
Submission Name: Semi Sweet
