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    dots Submission Name: I am the laughing god.dots
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    Author: EclipseIV
    Elite Ratio:    0.23 - 0/1/2
    Words: 126
    Class/Type: Misc/Serious
    Total Views: 108
    Average Vote:    4.5000
    Bytes: 794



    Description:
       Inspired by the name that I started with as a simple tragic hero. It has since evolved into the ultimate form of good and evil in a clash of titanic emotions.

    Only one girl will understand the true meaning of the bracketed lines.


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    dotsI am the laughing god.dots
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    I am the darkness I man's history

    But I am also the light their future...

    I am the embodiment of the lost souls of wars past

    But I am also the catalyst of the wars of tomorrow...

    I am the vengeance of the enraged....

    But I am also the enraged one's self...

    [I am her opposite

    But I am also her similarity...]

    I represent the primal instincts of all life

    But I am also life itself...

    I am the perfect contradiction

    But I am also the perfect balance...

    I am the Anti- Hero

    But I am also am the Hero himself.


    I am Jester...

    I am the laughing god.




    Submitted on 2007-09-10 20:48:56     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Stunned and confused... never could understand lyrics. I thought it was cool... but once more I was confused...
    Liked the part in the brackets the best. Keep it up. Now off to find a subtion I dislike...
    | Posted on 2007-11-28 00:00:00 | by Coripa | [ Reply to This ]


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