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    dots Submission Name: I'm Beginning Todots
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    Author: jackz
    ASL Info:    24/F/OH
    Elite Ratio:    3.76 - 591/623/381
    Words: 179
    Class/Type: Random Thoughts/Love
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       To my Furture Husband. Without him I would not be here. Without him there's so many things that I could not accomplish.


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    Your arms shield me from all the wrong in this world.
    Everything you do, is for me
    And I know this

    You always seem to be there for me, and I'm beginning to believe you aren't leaving

    Today...

    I have you and our future racing throughout my mind
    And I just can't wait to leave my past behind
    Have you pick me up and run off with you!

    I'm beginning to see that you truly love me
    The same way I love you

    For once I have someone who cares...
    For once I'm not being used
    For once this is real and not a dream I will awake from

    UHHHHH.... I love you so much, without you there is no meaning to life.
    Because you are my world

    And marring you is the best thing that I could ever do.
    For we are soul mates, and forever...
    Our arms will protect one another from all the wrong that is within this world we live.

    Forever I will love you.




    Submitted on 2007-09-11 12:03:48     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Haha, I really hope this goes well for you. Yet again.... hope to hear from you soon. Shadow
    | Posted on 2007-10-28 00:00:00 | by Shadow24968 | [ Reply to This ]
      Oh how I wish Love Conquers all
    and marriage is what we all need.
    But anyway I not sure if this is free form
    or not But I do think its a beautiful poem.
    I just not sure of the format.

    The Poor Man's Poet.
    | Posted on 2007-09-11 00:00:00 | by Bobby K | [ Reply to This ]
      Beautiful words and thoughts about a very especial person! Marriage is still a precious institution, and your lovely words and thoughts give credence to this battered and neglected institution! It makes one hope that love and marriage can be synonymous!! Nice going, Jackie!
    | Posted on 2007-09-11 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]


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