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"life turns to sex".


Author: Magger32
ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
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Words: 141
Class/Type: Poetry /Passion
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IDK?!! a good time?


"life turns to sex".



Shadows follow my lead.
Falling into fire.
This is the love I once used to desire.

I miss falling into your eyes,
Resting in your arms.
Dam I guess you just made me feel so strong.



Your shirt off shows your beautiful body…
And here I am thinking about another somebody.

This is all not right.
This I know.
Still I stay to show…
Just how stupid I am.

I hold your hand as we walk to the field.
Waking past the fears I wield.
I don’t want to leave him,
Everything I though was real.
Ohh well, that is just how I feel.
You’re the one behind the wheel.

I give into temptation.
It feels too good, to be real.
Now this is how I feel. !

Make sense?

NO!!




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  "I give into temptation.
It feels too good, to be real.
Now this is how I feel. !

Make sense?

NO!!"


Man, do I feel this...

Temptation...it'll do you in every d*mn time.
| Posted on 2007-09-15 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]
  I can totally feel your confusion. Its like some sick game of tug-a-war. i know what you're saying, you give into temptation even though you know you shouldn't. if i had a dime for everytime that happens to me....

cheers
| Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by Alyra | [ Reply to This ]
  hmmm
just a little lost here
help me out of my fudmuddlebent, please

xoxo
| Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by blu_kittin | [ Reply to This ]


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