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    dots Submission Name: mask of nihilationdots
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    Author: griever13
    ASL Info:    20/M/England
    Elite Ratio:    1.67 - 4/15/16
    Words: 174
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    this is about the masks we wear in everyday life, the face we show everyone, a so called protection from reality, the mask is what we cover ourselves with, afraid to state our true feelings we put on the masks, i thought to write about it, and to try to put across that if we hide ourselves behind false masks then we pave way to our own self destruction


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    a mask lying in soil, a mask that once was skin
    a face once worn, the image that is illusion
    lost to time, ingrained in life, eyes wrought with sin
    in the face of sorrow, the mask cast away
    torn from the body, flesh and bone revealed
    to grow skin anew, eyes of innocence wanting stay


    masks worn of the jester race, dancing in the pale moonlight
    the moonclad reflection in blackened blood
    no mask cast away, images burning the jesters eyes shut tight
    inner conflict wages war, wracked with grief are they
    gripping minds tight, unable to control streams of thought
    taste of blood on the tongue, words that they cannot say

    darkening thoughts trickle, seeping through cracked mental walls
    eroding away at sanity, poisoning all reason
    sinking nails into flesh, screams of agony echo frightening all
    fates nihilistic fantasy coming to fruition
    realisation of non existence, self corruption bringing forth our demise
    choose, become life create purpose, or slave to fates dream of self destruction






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