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    dots Submission Name: Sceaming Voicesdots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    dotsSceaming Voicesdots
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    Screaming voices
    tear me apart.
    Violating my mind,
    raping my heart.
    Crying out for death,
    desecrated by fear.
    Yelling in pain,
    shamed all can hear.





    Submitted on 2007-09-12 00:07:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      It's very strong and moving good write.
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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