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    dots Submission Name: My Tears Stain the Altardots
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    Author: Vampiric Death
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    Words: 68
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsMy Tears Stain the Altardots
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    My tears stain the altar,
    as his blood cleans my soul.
    As never before,
    I truly feel whole.
    My burdens have fled,
    my footsteps are light.
    For the first time ever,
    I've done something right.
    My sins are forgiven,
    by his saving grace.
    My life's only desire:
    to look upon his face.
    To hear his great voice
    welcome me home.
    Then nevermore
    shall my soul roam.




    Submitted on 2007-09-12 00:08:45     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I like this alot and it reminded me of of poem I wrote myself called "Ashling" if you get a chance come and read it and tell me what you think.
    Great write and great writer!
    Kelley Frost
    | Posted on 2007-11-20 00:00:00 | by whendt | [ Reply to This ]
      Wow. I like it. It's very nice good write.
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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