Description: im done
im over him
ive finally realised i dont need him
it wasnt that i still loved him
it was that i wasnt ready to forget
now i am and i look foward to my life and the choises im about to make
im giving up on you -------------------------------------------
im giving up on you
its over done never to be re lived
ive moved on with my life
nothing good ever came from me and you
now i finally see
i meant nothing to you and now you mean nothing to me
no more tears will fall from my eyes
no more scars written with a blade
no more poems about what used to be
im done
given up on you and me
my memories are gone
cant tell the diffrence between truth and lie
no more forgivness no more tries
its time i moved on
time i said good-bye
gone from my life
the story is written
the book has been closed
its over its done
ive given up on you
forever
I can really relate to alot of your writing its like the words are things i feel and need to say i had trouble moving on and i still aint found neone who has been able to fix my broken heart but u have and that gives me hop ei really enjoy all your writing
I really liked this, it seems so final....which I am hoping is the point of the poem.
Trust me, giving it all up is a very hard road, i am assuming that this write is about a guy? A few of my poems are about my ex who means nothing to me now, but the road to feeling nothing was so paved full of obsticles (calling me, asking to see me) that I felt like I'd take one step forward and two steps back.
Anyway, I hope you can see how much better off you are without this person in your life, life is hard enough with out people lying and deceiving us all the time.
Submission Name: im giving up on you
