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    dots Submission Name: Haunting Consciencedots

    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsHaunting Consciencedots

    My eyes are all cried out
    yet the pain still feels the same,
    it has me in a chokehold
    and I'm gasping for one last breath.

    A force is pushing through my chest
    and takes hold of my heart,
    and the life is draining out of me
    and I suffer a painful death.

    Everything begins to fade
    and the world I see turns black,
    I'm induced inside a coma
    and I can't get myself out.

    The seering pain caused by
    the sting from the blade,
    hurts you as well as me
    and you don't even know.

    Everyday I do something different
    but all leads to one thing,
    I'm trying to make you notice
    how much your love means to me.

    But you have a funny way of showing your love
    there are times where you just avoid me,
    so I take this pistol 3--2--1
    BANG! it haunts your conscience.

    Submitted on 2007-09-12 16:42:24     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      the emotion is pouring through on this one definately
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]

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