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    dots Submission Name: Trying to Understand (your kind of love)dots
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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 114
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsTrying to Understand (your kind of love)dots
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    words can't even express
    the emotions I'm feeling
    I have a head-ache from thinking about
    the other day and what you said
    i don't understand
    if you love me so
    why am i getting mixed signals
    i honestly don't know
    two-three years you asked the same question
    and for two-three years i gave the same answer
    but this year is different even though i said no
    my feelings toward you seemed to grow
    yet i don't understand
    i gave my heart to you
    and even though you still like me
    you won't take it from me
    i'm just not getting
    where you're getting at
    do you REALLY love me or not?




    Submitted on 2007-09-12 16:49:21     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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