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    dots Submission Name: I Don't Know (how else to tell you)dots
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    Author: truthbetold
    ASL Info:    20-f
    Elite Ratio:    3.4 - 38/45/33
    Words: 104
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 758
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    dotsI Don't Know (how else to tell you)dots
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    I don't know how else to tell you
    you don't understand
    the answer was so obvious
    but you didn't get it.
    I like you.
    I do want to go out with you.

    I don't know how else to tell you.

    It's not like i was speaking in another language
    I was clear and to the point
    but you just don't seem to get it
    and you took it the wrong way.
    You don't realize
    the pain I'm in
    the depression I'm going through
    and the things I seem to do.

    I don't know how else to tell you.




    Submitted on 2007-09-12 16:50:47     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      well, what can I say about it? were you writing ? or were you talking to your school mate, please you have to write more poetically, you do not have to write as you were just talking, do not mix it, i hope you canget me, you have to use more imagination, and symbolism i guess, take care and have a nice day
    and if you have time please take a look to my writings,
    peace and love
    victor
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]
      dae!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! im here for you!!!! i love you!!!! i definately know how this feels.
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by black rose13 | [ Reply to This ]


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