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2 Ways


Author: soaring eyes
ASL Info:    17/f/ga
Elite Ratio:    2.47 - 18 /30 /19
Words: 209
Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
Total Views: 979
Average Vote:    4.0000
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Description:




2 Ways



Slow kisses
Sweet touches
From night time blisses
to child hood crushes
But I'm no longer a child...
My body has now developed
curves in all the right places
lips soft
having all the right tastes.
No longer scared to show my love to him in a sexual form of expression
Now having all the right answers
to all the right questions.
I'm experiencing new things
taking new routes
Now trying to find my way through
instead of my way out.
I close my eyes as I lay and his body is exploring me.
Making a way in
pain and pleasure flows over me.
Hurts to the fullest
but feels so good.
this moment in time I wouldn't explain if i could...
My first time.
With my last
the one i will marry and make furture with
not a past
opening up a brand new :class:
intimate expression
he has given me a new lesson
how to love physically and emtionally
to the point where i don't want anyone else to hold on to me.
a new race
no more a chace
no one can take his place
cause he holds this memory that will never be erased : )




Submitted on 2007-09-12 18:21:09     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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  Any expression of love and intamacy is worthy of a comment. Very well put together and vividly expressed.

Very well done.

Frank.
| Posted on 2008-03-17 00:00:00 | by Frank Maguire | [ Reply to This ]
  THis was great and I can relate to it in so many ways I love tghe way you just let it flow stright from your soul...Something like this is hard to describe i agree..I like this alot because this is how i feel abotu my partner of 4 months now...my fave part is when you stated the one i will marry and make furture with
not a past
and opening up a brand new :class:
intimate expression
he has given me a new lesson
this is true for most people who feel like this i learn something new everyday..and last but not least to the point where i don't want anyone else to hold on to me.
this is what i like most cuz it shows that your really trying to make it work and that your being honest to make it last great write a fave!
Crystal
| Posted on 2007-09-14 00:00:00 | by Hip-Hop Honey | [ Reply to This ]
  Well this piece would make a really good TLC song (Left Eye Would be Proud.) but as a piece of poetry it's more of something that teens would be able to relate too rather than grown adults. I guess what I'm saying is that this will not grab the attention of more mature readers, but never fear, teens will go nuts over it.
| Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by Martin S. Allen | [ Reply to This ]


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