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    dots Submission Name: Miscalculated Brainstormsdots
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    Author: Midnight Shadow
    ASL Info:    22/f
    Elite Ratio:    2.24 - 47/151/126
    Words: 89
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsMiscalculated Brainstormsdots
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    I've got four reasons
    they aren't that great
    but i think they're good enough
    to convey what i'm trying to explain
    a dictionary wide eyed smile
    and a misconception of bad behavior
    a sure way to get lost in an abyss
    of thesarus crazy hearts found in the dark
    its a color of the wind and the smell of the air
    a lovely common problem of scenario
    get out of the encyclopedia mind spell
    a best situation of miscalculated brainstorms




    Submitted on 2007-09-12 18:55:57     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Let me see if I truly understand this. Are you going for the idea that simplicity in writing has its place and that time spent stewing in sources for the glitter words is not necessary to make your point?
    | Posted on 2007-09-13 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
      Not bad at all
    This write immediately brought tomy mind how much the english language can signify a person
    Sadly a lot of people are judged on their grammer and their so called use of big words
    Whose to say an english major is any smarter then you or me just because they are so quick with language
    Nice Job!!
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-09-12 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]


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