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    dots Submission Name: cut to the vein dots
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    Author: tainted-faerie
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 12/16/25
    Words: 145
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 78
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    dotscut to the vein dots
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    cut to the vein
    and watch it bleed,
    my hunger for pain
    is all i need
    i think ive cut too deep this time
    maybe i'll drown in my blood tonight
    maybe its time i end it all
    open your eyes and watch me fall
    see what you once refused to see
    catch me before im in too deep
    hold me, wipe away my tears
    love me, help me ease my fears
    gently pull away the knife
    with which i tried to end my life
    i look up into your crying eyes,
    you jistdont get how bad i want to die
    youll forget just let me go
    how this feels you'll never know
    i slowly start to fade away
    maybe i'll see you again one day
    i feel your arms around me tight,
    but its too late...

    i'll die tonight.




    Submitted on 2007-09-13 10:09:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      wow I really like this I love the way it flows

    but I think you meant "just", not "jist"
    peace- Taby cat
    | Posted on 2007-09-19 00:00:00 | by Secret_callie | [ Reply to This ]



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