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    Author: tainted-faerie
    ASL Info:    18/f/ga
    Elite Ratio:    3.37 - 12/16/25
    Words: 164
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 73
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 970



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    Would you save me from a bullet
    Would you keep me from sharp knives
    Would you keep me very happy
    And all to save my life

    Would you keep me smiling sweetly
    Would you look me in the eyes
    Would you tell me all these sweet things
    And keep me from the lies

    Would you kiss me on the forehead
    Would you brush away my tears
    Would you keep me in your heart all times
    And take away my fears

    Would you mend my broken heart ache
    Would you make it beat again
    Would you keep me in your safe warm arms
    And keep away the pain

    Would you tell me I’m your angel
    Would you always be so true
    Would you protect me from those awful things
    And keep me from the blue

    Would you save my sorrowed soul
    Would you keep away my cries
    Would you save me from myself
    i guess you wouldnt





    Submitted on 2007-09-13 10:20:22     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      hehehe...I have felt like this too. HAHAHA...that is great. Believe it or not it makes a good point! I would name this "Would You..." I know that is obvious for a name but it fits actually.
    | Posted on 2007-09-15 00:00:00 | by Desolate_beauty | [ Reply to This ]



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