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    dots Submission Name: rememberdots
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    Author: gwenn sundala
    Elite Ratio:    3.71 - 76/70/51
    Words: 242
    Class/Type: Lyrics/Longing
    Total Views: 722
    Average Vote:    4.0000
    Bytes: 1556



    Description:
       okay so i typed up the song and now here it is without the chords. if you`re ever interested in hearing it? well, i may publish it so watch for it under the name eliza something more other i`ll let you know!!!


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    dotsrememberdots
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    i`ve watched you all grow up
    you`ve seen me grow up, too
    and now all i can think about
    is how much i miss you
    now some of us are gone
    they`ve left for the land beyond
    the rest of us are scattered
    our relationships are battered


    i remember you
    do you remember me?
    as you walk on by
    tears fall from my eyes
    what happened to our friends?
    i remember you
    do you remember me?
    through the good times and the bad
    i remember you


    it`s not the same at all
    i know you would agree
    but towards evil you have fallen
    so i come to you and plead


    i remember you
    do you remember me?
    as you walk on by
    tears fall from my eyes
    what happened to our friends?
    i remember you
    do you remember me?
    through the good times and the bad
    i remember you


    nothing could ever stop stop us
    from fighting for our beliefs
    i know whenever we`re together
    we help keep each other strong
    and i`ll love you my whole life long


    i remember you
    do you remember me?
    when you come back home
    run into my arms
    we`ll always love you here
    i remember you
    do you remember me?
    through the good times and bad
    with the love we`ve had
    though i`m in fatal pain
    there`s sunshine through this rain
    and i remember you...




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    ||| Comments |||
      I think this'll sound pretty cool when it's put to music. It's got the right flow that it should go pretty well. I too can relate to this a bit.
    | Posted on 2008-06-15 00:00:00 | by bgeorge | [ Reply to This ]
      Very pretty...a longing to have made an impact on that person, to have not been forgotten so easily. I can relate...big time...

    I hope they don't forget you!!!
    | Posted on 2007-09-13 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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