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    dots Submission Name: WE ARE THE NEXT USdots
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    Author: goveiac
    ASL Info:    30/M/Toronto
    Elite Ratio:    2.72 - 57/71/61
    Words: 824
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 62
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
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    The time occupied by the action is an afternoon and one night.

    I don’t know who comes up with this shit
    but, I wish they’d stop saying;
    ‘it’s not the band I hate, it’s their fans’

    You can’t hate “fans”.
    You must narrow your hate
    You can’t hate huge, hate sprawling, hate the wild,
    unfocussed hate hates itself,
    pick your victims. specialize
    find the good n’ unaffiliated, the heir-not apparent, the everyday outcast,
    the weirdo with the heart of gold, infiltrate the hoser elite.
    Find the ribs-showingest rock n roll stray dog
    That ever pushed melodious air
    howling against vivisection in the uncompartmentalizeable
    night.
    and, then hate

    or go to a show - look down your row.
    the lights are on - find people you know.
    There’s AnthemSinger standing with his arm
    around DarklyNurturedDream.
    and Ol’Quintessential listening to HigherThanACBCGuest say;
    “I haven’t read them, but I understand them.”
    And there’s BrainOfAToaster (he knows when things are done)
    next to that girl, CradlingHerKeyCard, whispering,
    “this might be my last show, come.”
    Check it out! There’s HoldStill and Gently - together again for the very first time.
    and MyDoctrineHasFailedMeButMyMusicHasn’t
    next to ColderValues, next to FeaturelessButFree.
    Hey, even TheEmperorHasNoHook is here and IDon’tWannaTalkAboutItHowYouBrokeMyHeart, she’s here too.

    Go to a show. Look down your row
    While the lights are on
    find people you know:
    MindOfFame’s yelling
    to GoesWithoutSaying and
    OverTheRadar points out
    WinWinWinWin to
    GulpIndeed

    Go to a show.
    Music Lovers under a full moon in trust
    It’s not the band you like it’s their sea of hate you don’t trust
    you’re in the right place

    Author a killing.
    employ carelessness, greed
    wait til the hate’s flowing
    then hate like the wind
    take hate’s hate and do it better
    make hate retire - go soft
    catch bats til you feel better
    try and catch them aloft

    don’t hate fans it makes ya sound like a fuckin fascist, or worse -
    undiscerning.
    No one likes indiscriminate.
    you won’t get laid with those politics

    that said. Lets go backstage! See what’s hateable there.
    C’mon!

    C’mon

    C’mon
    The band is preparing - lost in thought,
    relearning, “How To Get Lost” and
    “Where To Appear, Where to Never Appear”
    hoping to return to the birthplace of the word
    where winning sentences hang from trees
    where no one is too cool to move
    or too slow to get out of their own way.

    The crew is moving on water
    Tributarily spring-run-off fed rapids they’re paddling
    deliberately, quietly, fur-traders not missionaries
    they run God’s Instrument through the Devil’s Amp for chrissakes
    they bring the Peace If Peace
    is any good at all
    it’s because of them,
    and if it isn’t, well, it was working before.

    a shadowy figure stands alone with a notebook
    writes then underlines;
    ‘Glowing Disses’
    - I fucked Paul McCartney
    - Put teen ennui back in ‘tsunami fatigue’
    - Penned Relentlessly Apt…
    - Forgot DarklyNurturedDream

    look,
    deep in conversation,
    It’s Picasso (Canadian) and Matisse (Canadian)
    ‘Giving is where the pleasure is in this business.’
    ‘That’s when can you see what this business can do’
    ‘When everyone in this business is together- whoa - I’d like to be you’
    they organize relief in a heartbeat
    they can stand in a canoe
    lets move UN to the Halifax move Superior to the moon.

    Hey there’s Andrea, the dancer
    and a poet named Ken.
    Their nametags say, ‘Muse’
    they are Somebody’s Someone Somewhere then
    waving to the Canadian Arc
    they’re gonna do something
    together one day
    A thing about a country that
    found itself in its
    art found its way

    It’s getting time - it’s getting close (go to your seats)
    a part in the night where’s the love of my life?
    kiss me, ‘thank you for this’
    kiss me ‘I won’t be myself without you’
    kiss me, It’s time, to reach you the way you reach me
    it’s time.

    Out in the emptying lobby, a lonely Waterkeeper is late setting up his booth.
    A kid, who is interested, says, ‘here, let me help you.’

    Here’s an explosion
    an explosion inside
    the just before music sound (the sound of just before music)
    kindnesses, sweetnesses shoot up
    and shower back down
    The listeners have spoken, and it’s,

    WeAreTheNextUs.

    We all have our moments
    get the success we deserve
    We must look at each other
    (it’s failure that takes nerve)
    make eye contact, shake hands
    silently vow;
    Like the greats before us
    let us cry into the curtains
    and then go on stage

    Now

    The band’s plugging in (they intend to stay)
    The singer strides to the microphone
    Yells (rock voice) ‘Thank you!’ as if to say
    ‘For giving us our start!’
    and ‘This one’s for Neil!’
    and ‘Have a great Augusta, Craig!’
    And then we start

    It’s revealed

    now you can hate





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