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    dots Submission Name: sold soulsdots
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    Author: Myopic
    Elite Ratio:    2.31 - 31/58/63
    Words: 118
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 908
    Average Vote:    3.0000
    Bytes: 560



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    dotssold soulsdots
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    Reign me,
    you specter of light and
    sun.
    Rise,
    O, waning
    crescent of womb
    and you
    you
    thful tastes of
    scar ed
    hopeful O
    blivion.
    Take from me
    all you
    need
    for food,
    for sleep,
    for me,
    for
    your aching waists
    will no longer be tunnels of need:
    O,
    propositions for great
    human
    progress
    and
    s
    old
    s
    ouls




    Submitted on 2007-09-14 07:32:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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