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Submission Name:
mad man
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Author:
tobias-stone
ASL Info:
19/Male/Kingston,ON
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8 - 1/0/4
Words:
264
Class/Type:
Poetry/The pain inside
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a poem i wrote a while ago feed back if you wish
mad man
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The Mad Man
so here i sit with the thoughts of a mad man in my skull
with no way to express him to the world
he wants to be released but no one can calm him
he hungers for sweet release to the world of the living
but to no avail can he sway mine mind to his warped view
if the one who could calm him be present upon his release
he would surely go stark mad to eternity and beyond
never to return to the surface of his prison
but atlas none doth exist anymore for they have rejected him
so with that in mind i deny him again his appeal to me
upon me seeing the glimmer of hope in her eyes
do i let my guard down does he make his move against my sanity
but with her denying my existance doth his attempt at freedom fail
and my soul go with him to the depths of the prison that is my mind
so there we sit him and i behind the prison that is me
both eger to esscape and only room for one to live
he knows i could wrest the win from him
but i'm afraid if he even gets close to control
none but him and i know the damage that he could inflict
so here we sit, he plotting destruction, i asking for forgivness at creating this monster
Submitted on 2007-09-15 23:43:39
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