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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 196
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsdemonsdots
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    The screams of my brotherly demons
    Can be heard from beneath these sacred burial grounds
    For they live to drink the fresh blood of virgins down
    And as they rip away at their flesh, A feverish scream
    Over takes this tainted land with an evil hand..

    Their razor blade finger tips
    Send the frightened souls of the human world into a frenzied spin
    As they drink the blood of their sinning families, The blood runs crimson red across the land..
    Nothing will be left in the end
    Except for the poisoned spit of these demons saliva
    That will be turned into an undaunted trivia..
    Of human carcases shraded by the grey matted teeth of dirt and sand..

    The fires of hell will explode
    Onto the earths sinning surfaces
    As the rebirth, Of the anti Christ
    Spread fourth , Like an illuminated probe
    Beneath the dirt, These hungry lice
    Will provide hell with your tainted unholy souls..

    Their new goal
    To expose the chosen few to a new school
    Of nightmares, As they rip out their hair and their brains
    This nation will be stained by the fresh paint of human blood stains..




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