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    dots Submission Name: cutting out the paindots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 398
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 891
    Average Vote:    5.0000
    Bytes: 1355



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    dotscutting out the paindots
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    I'm sitting here on the bathroom floor,
    ...curled into a ball...
    My eyes are rimmed red
    [red with regret and tears]
    curled into the fetal position,wanting to be smaller
    I'm reliving the nightmares

    your nightmares

    I'm experiencing the excruciating pain
    reliving the attack
    [I'm the pincusion]
    This is what every other victim has felt

    So I'm here curled up
    - can't get any smaller-
    I'm banging my head against the tiled wall.
    You aren't coming out.

    I pick up the scissors numbly
    [my scissors.my salvation,my messiah]
    I slowly begin to cut, relishing every nerve
    I'm cutting out the memory
    I'm cutting out the pain
    I'm diverting it
    ... and my arm begins to bleed...

    it's crying
    it's dying like me
    it's pouring out the memories

    they're red like my eyes

    and it doesn't hurt anymore.....




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