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    dots Submission Name: end of daysdots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotsend of daysdots
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    slice into my soul once more
    burn me to my inner core
    death is calling me its friend
    bring me to the very end.
    a drop of blood will stain my cheek
    a heartache of which i never speak
    just cut me up from outside in
    the knife is begging to begin.
    deeper deeper blades of steel
    is this pain all that is real?
    never stop, pull out the gun
    pull the trigger, that's the one.
    empty now, my body lays
    gone forever, end of days




    Submitted on 2007-09-16 05:02:34     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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