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    dots Submission Name: sweet suicidedots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 192
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotssweet suicidedots
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    I would need this gun
    To complete my mission
    I would need this CD
    So I can listen
    A cell phone
    To say good bye
    Kleenex
    For my cry
    This is the sweetest suicide
    A car
    So I can drive
    A pin and pad
    To leave a note
    Alcohol
    To numb the pain
    Weed
    To fuck up my brain
    Maybe coke
    To thin my veins
    This is the sweetest suicide
    Photos
    To remember the good times
    A destination
    To do my crime
    The ocean
    Because I love it
    A watch
    To mark the time
    Farewell
    Goodbye
    I can't make up my mind
    This is the sweetest suicide
    I feel the wind blowing up my sleeves
    The ocean water touching my knees
    The earth is so beautiful
    To bad I have to leave
    The tide is high
    I take a swim
    Now I start counting
    Down to my sin
    The gun is loaded
    My letters wrote
    Blues are playing
    I take a line of coke
    Calls are made
    Messages sent
    I hit this weed
    And take a sip
    Splatter my brains
    And fall into the ocean
    This is the sweetest suicide
    Farewell
    Goodbye




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