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    dots Submission Name: welcome homedots

    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 288
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
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    dotswelcome homedots

    I walked through the local cemetery last night
    It was so quiet, everyone was at peace
    I felt so welcome, so at home
    there among the deceased

    I begun thinking, why do I continue on
    why do I inhale even one more breath
    when all I dream of is the eternal slumber
    that can only be brought about by death

    Grief and pain are the only inhabitants
    of a soul which would otherwise be an empty space
    Was it time for the end?
    This was the choice which I faced

    After all, everyday is merely a continuation
    of the one which preceded it
    There have ben times when I felt slightly hopeful
    but there was never any hope when I most needed it

    And there is little I wish to recall
    the years are wrought with sadness
    I've lost my mind, a million times
    but I always find it again within madness

    As my heart has drifted along
    I knew it could not stay afloat
    with each day that passed
    I felt it sink deeper in misery's boat

    So there, amongst the dead
    I came to the conclusion
    That it was time to bring
    an end to my life's illusions

    The blood flowed like a river
    as I took a razor to my wrist
    I would have made preparations, said good-byes
    but, I doubt I'll be missed

    It became so cold
    as everything went black
    for the first time, I felt peace
    because I knew there was no going back

    No hope. No dreams. No anything.
    I had no further reason to try
    I no longer wished to live
    I do not regret the decision I made to die

    Submitted on 2007-09-16 05:04:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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