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    dots Submission Name: rundots
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    Author: Darc Angel
    ASL Info:    18/m/ny
    Elite Ratio:    3.95 - 10/5/56
    Words: 231
    Class/Type: Misc/Misc
    Total Views: 809
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1373



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    dotsrundots
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    To this world I'm unimportant just because I have nothing to give
    So you call this your free country
    Tell me why it cost so much to live
    Tell me why

    This world can turn me down
    But I won't turn away, oh no
    I won't turn around

    All my work and endless measures never seem to get me very far
    Walk a mile just to move an inch
    Now even though I'm trying so damn hard
    I'm trying so hard

    This world can turn me down but I won't turn away
    And I won't duck and run, cause I'm not built that way
    When everything is gone there is nothing there to fear
    This world cannot bring me down

    No cause I'm already here, oh no!
    I am already here, down on my knees
    I am already here, oh no, I am alreday here
    I must have told you a thousand times I am not running away

    I won't duck and run
    I won't duck and run
    I won't duck and run
    No I won't pass away

    This world can turn me down but I won't turn away
    And I won't duck and run, cause I'm not built that way
    When everything is gone there is nothing there to fear
    This world cannot bring me down
    No cause I'm already here




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