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    dots Submission Name: Sensing the Seasons dots

    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 136
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    dotsSensing the Seasons dots

    Sensing the Seasons

    Flowers they smell so sweet.
    Budding all around my feet.
    Smelling like a sweet wine,
    Clustered in a tangled vine.

    Sunshine it feels so fresh.
    Shining down on my flesh,
    Feeling like a summer day,
    Warmed by a sunny ray.

    Trees they are beheld with grace.
    Falling leaves drift by my face.
    Seeing each float like a breeze
    Cleared away from the trees

    Snowflakes they are to be savored.
    Making my mouth all wintry flavored.
    Tasting them in a childlike hurry,
    Covered my tongue in a snow flurry.

    Seasons they all draw so near.
    Changing ways hiss in my ear.
    Hearing them change one by one.
    Changed by all when they're done.

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      I cannot believe I'm the first to comment on your wonderful look at the seasons. In the midst of all the cold of winter, I must admit I enjoyed thinking about the flowers and sunshine of seasons to come. You made me smile today knowing that spring is next in line! :-) Sharon
    | Posted on 2007-12-30 00:00:00 | by Peggy Paris | [ Reply to This ]

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