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    dots Submission Name: So Sad dots
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    Author: PrettyHeart
    ASL Info:    39
    Elite Ratio:    3.06 - 62/55/53
    Words: 66
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Average Vote:    5.0000
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    dotsSo Sad dots
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    So sad is a love lost.
    Lost in a soul drowning
    A soul drowning in misery
    Misery that is unforgiving to the heart.
    A heart that's been mended time and time again.
    Nevertheless, in time the love will die.
    It dies along with a soul that fought for life.
    Furthermore, a heart that no longer could be mended.




    Submitted on 2007-09-16 08:11:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      God, this is sad.

    "But in time the love will die
    It dies along with a soul that fought for life
    And a heart that no longer could be mended."

    You said it so marvelously...and it's true.

    Amazing job...
    | Posted on 2007-09-17 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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