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    dots Submission Name: "A lost beat" =( dots
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    Author: Magger32
    ASL Info:    18-female-PA.
    Elite Ratio:    2.45 - 53/131/124
    Words: 127
    Class/Type: Poetry/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 655
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       My mother's hatred pours out of my heart in pain.


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    dots"A lost beat" =( dots
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    I've always been lost but now I find.
    What I've hidden away in my mind.

    My mother's voice rings from the kitchen,
    Cursing yelling, PMS in`.

    She hates me one minute then the next:
    she wants me to lover her and forget the rest.

    I can forget the pain, the tears and the blood.
    I can forget how she messed me up.

    At night I lay in my bed..
    Wishing to forget everything she's said.
    I think of how sweet she sounded, but how mean she could be.
    But even though I can forgive I can't get rid of the scars that show on me.

    My heart now pours free.





    Submitted on 2007-09-16 09:52:55     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      it would have more impact if it was written like a nursery rhym. this is a deep issue and could have been more eloquently put if you hadn't used the sing-song flow and the adolescent rhyme pattern.

    oh, but nice rhyming kitchen and pms'in...
    | Posted on 2007-09-16 00:00:00 | by medusa | [ Reply to This ]


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