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    dots Submission Name: The Dance dots
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    Author: amrslamr
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 18/18/16
    Words: 272
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
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    Description:
       Asking the wrong one to the dance


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    dotsThe Dance dots
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    The Dance 20070620
    By AMR


    Will you please dance with me?
    I ask you, smilingly
    And try to pull you out onto the floor.

    But you pull your hand free
    And will not dance with me.
    You say you want to wait a little more

    What if you take a chance
    And join me in this dance?
    We値l close our eyes and really take a spin.

    What if we both fall down,
    And, laughing, on the ground,
    We find we like the tangle that we池e in ?

    But you just tell me no.
    "This music is too slow.
    The next song is too loud and it痴 too fast"

    If you値l just trust me to
    I値l show the steps to you.
    But as you stall another song goes past

    I see the other men
    Who hope I値l dance with them
    Though I still wait for you to dance with me.

    I知 trying to be true
    And not give up on you
    But will you ever really take a chance?

    I love you but you know
    One day I値l let you go
    And find another partner for the dance .




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      Nice piece about waiting for the one you truly love, but eventually you have to move on to someone that will return your love I thought this piece was well written, keep up te good work, Dean
    | Posted on 2007-11-10 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]


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