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    dots Submission Name: I Love Everything About You dots

    Author: amrslamr
    Elite Ratio:    4.44 - 18/18/16
    Words: 188
    Class/Type: Prose/Love
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    I Love Everything About You

    "I love everything about you: your arms, your face, your touch, your smile.
    You break me free from my life and make me dream, sitting wide-eyed in the broad-day sun.

    Moments when I'm not expecting it, you come to me.
    I see you before me and feel your love go through me at odd hours of the day.
    I feel my body warm where you touched me with your hands.
    My skin burns where you breathed a trail of kisses.

    I smile when I think of the tender ways you touched me
    With soft pressures and sweet invasions.
    Your loving explorations plundered me, as I made willing surrender of
    Any treasure I posessed,
    My heart and very soul not the least.

    To see you, to have you, to be near you,
    I would give all that I have a million times, and a million times more.

    I love everything about you. Tomorrow I will love you more."

    Submitted on 2007-09-16 19:39:25     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I know exactly how you feel, Dean
    | Posted on 2007-11-01 00:00:00 | by Survivor_Dean | [ Reply to This ]

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