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    dots Submission Name: Lovedots
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    Author: _winky_
    ASL Info:    25/f/minnesota
    Elite Ratio:    4.32 - 664/529/96
    Words: 17
    Class/Type: Misc/
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    dotsLovedots
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    Love is like a revolving door
    It opens up with great ease,
    but closing it is impossible.




    Submitted on 2007-09-16 21:54:01     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      You write beautifully, Jennifer! There is a sense of great compassion and sensitivity in this, and this verse speaks volumes for such a short piece!
    | Posted on 2008-01-20 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
      I love it, the great thing about love also is that everyone get a turn....
    I really appreciate the simplistic meaning of this poem,
    Thanks,
    Spin
    | Posted on 2007-09-19 00:00:00 | by Spin | [ Reply to This ]
      This poem only has three lines, but so much meaning behind them. I can steadfastly agree it is so easy to fall in love with someone, but it's so hard to stop loving them... It's like it can't be done at all. I've found a little quote about love that I'll always share with other people:

    "Loving someone is giving them the ability to destroy you, and trusting them not to."

    You can't love someone without trust, and it's really hard to break someone's trust in you. Thanks for your post, I appreciate it alot Keep on sharing

    -Sere
    | Posted on 2007-09-19 00:00:00 | by Lil Sere | [ Reply to This ]
      I couldnt agree with your words more
    Love has a way of controling our minds and Heart so we are no longer the person we once were
    Love is an extremely hard word for me to say
    Truthfully Ionly use it with family as I am a 38 year old man who NEVER has found Love as in a relationship and to be Honest I dont think I ever will
    Very Well Said
    God Bless
    Ron
    Please if you get a chance Please take a look at some of my writes and let me know what you think
    Thank You
    Ron
    | Posted on 2007-09-17 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]
      Yeah we cant stop loving a person even though she (in my case) told me that she loves me but she doesnt want to be with me, it is very sad, but you have to respect her decision i am sad, sorry, so take care and have a nice day
    peace and LOVE
    Victor
    | Posted on 2007-09-16 00:00:00 | by vitoko | [ Reply to This ]


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