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    dots Submission Name: The Good Guys Are The Bad Guysdots
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    Author: JerichoMccoy
    ASL Info:    20/M/NJ
    Elite Ratio:    7.16 - 3/1/3
    Words: 416
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
    Total Views: 735
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    Description:
       There was a shooting near my town in a mall. An ex-boyfriend shot his Ex-girlfriend(She survived) and then committed suicide(Apparantly, he did not).

    My friend knew the ex-boyfriend and said to me that, "He was a nice guy. Couldn't picture him doing that."

    And it scared the crap out of me. Not that it was a normal guy who went bonkers. It's that now, EVERYONE is gonna think that nice guys are just ticking time bombs waiting to go off.

    Which makes being nice a hell of a lot harder for people to accept.

    So I wrote this poem or "Lyrical" piece to describe why the "Good" is the new "Bad".



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    dotsThe Good Guys Are The Bad Guysdots
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    Have you received flowers?

    Or a way to get where you need to go?

    A safe foundation,

    A natural flow.

    Then one day comes,

    it crashes down like a 747

    deep into his heart-mind

    with no reason to rise

    no reason to shine,

    He rips off his history

    No shares in his personality

    deep into his lonely.

    Hate fills his soul

    it consumes it all

    a volcano erupts

    Everyone screams out

    "That's fucked up!"

    the lava flows

    and all point to the guy

    who used to be 'Nice'

    But his spirit is spliced, diced,

    Shown on TV with a little extra spice

    to make him sound like your next door neighbor,

    Your co-worker or friend,

    making everyone suspectible of a helping hand

    And that is when a piece of humanity dies

    not by war

    but by those nice lies.

    Paranoia sweeps in

    No one is safe

    Alien Invasion of the Heart

    H.G.Wells would have new stories to tell

    of Human cynicism being humor health being ill

    So now being good is the new bad

    And bad is the new okay

    How the fuck did the World get this way?

    Giving disrespect became a freedom privilege

    Being Heartless became the new love

    Keyblades can not unlock the truth

    to why the darkness is being dug

    up from the Histories of long past

    The wearer of thorns is saying to himself

    In heaven, "Damn, I should have been an ass."

    Trust in your brotha

    Trust in your sista

    Do not allow the world

    to go against ya.

    Be strong,

    Your sword be smelt

    with the glories of the greats

    your opportunities will be dealt

    with joy and loyalty,

    love and honor,

    Do not send an endangered species

    to becoming the new horror.

    Be open to all and all will be open

    To possibilites, dreams, fascinations

    that would get this world rollin

    to a new age of Enlightenment, Fidelity, and peace,

    The chaotic ones want you to feel out of ease

    But who should I accept?

    Every person with a gun?

    No, I would say with Human Traits

    You've got legs, you can always run.




    Submitted on 2007-09-16 22:04:13     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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