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Sweet Golden Skies


Author: A Silver Key
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Class/Type: Poetry /Misc
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A Quarter Moon in June


Sweet Golden Skies



Indigo blue

escapes

this midnight hue

hiding from

bitter skies

which come as no surprise

almost like a liar's lies

and raindrops

falling from teary eyes

Footprints

are mere echoes

of bad goodbyes

Bloodshot

I almost forgot

That I loved you

a lot

That you loved me

not

And now there's nothing left

but shadows of your quarter moon

in blooming June

on a beautiful grey afternoon

which remind me

of a popped balloon

That I won't be seeing you

anytime soon

Now Ivory clouds

and pearl white doves

fly higher

together

thru inclement weather

into Indigo

and climbing higher

fighting fire

past the lies told by a liar

to anywhere they so desire

above the bitter

and into Sapphire

past the cold

into the old

letting the truth unfold

forgetting lies that I once told

and now needing the soul that I sold

past the indigo, ivory, and white

straight into the night

kissing sweet skies of gold

and whispering

I love you

a lot

Forget me

not






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  the more of you sork i read the more i want to almost cry, not tears of saness though, tears becuase it is so beautiful ....

"I almost forgot

That I loved you

a lot

That you loved me

not"

these words can really describe me right now, i felt for this one guy, and i felt he didnt feel for me at all..and now he hates me...
the ending is beautiful as well

"letting the truth unfold

forgetting lies that I once told

and now needing the soul that I sold

past the indigo, ivory, and white

straight into the night

kissing sweet skies of gold

and whispering

I love you

a lot

Forget me

not"

it is just truly wonderful!

i will read more of your work as soon as i can

Bella

btw, hope you dot mind if i add this to my favs...:)


Bella
| Posted on 2007-09-25 00:00:00 | by IsabellaAurora | [ Reply to This ]


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