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    dots Submission Name: Chasing Greydots
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    Author: A Silver Key
    Elite Ratio:    2.13 - 4/7/29
    Words: 62
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    Description:
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    dotsChasing Greydots
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    Pieces of my soul;
    breaking in two

    Fragments of my heart;
    beating for you

    Glimpses of gradient grey;
    coming into hue

    into a vibrant view

    Shadows of me;
    surrounded by a silent you

    Relentless red;
    meet beckoning blue

    color my palpitating palette a color that my grey once knew




    Submitted on 2007-09-17 01:37:16     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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