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    dots Submission Name: I LOVE...IDIOTSdots
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    Author: Crestfallenman
    ASL Info:    21/M/CA
    Elite Ratio:    4.71 - 603/834/354
    Words: 302
    Class/Type: Prose/Fuck it all
    Total Views: 195
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 1780



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       Hope to get some good responses out of this.


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    dotsI LOVE...IDIOTSdots
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    I LOVE THE LAME USE of comments that are "good job" or "nice job"

    I LOVE THE comments that are an attempt to try to make the reader smarter than the writer, when God willingly the writer knows the reader is just full of shit.

    I LOVE those who don't know the diffence between constructive critisim and insulting the writer.

    I LOVE THESE IDIOTS Popularity addiction,
    I LOVE THE Lack of knowledge on most subjects.
    I LOVE the Lack of respect for others.



    I really love the idiots that get offended by your poetry and have the urge just to leave a comment on your poetry telling you how much you've offended them. It really cracks me up, if you didn't like it at all, you didn't have to read through the whole thing and then comment on it afterwords.

    I wish to have more of them comment...

    I love those who to degrade those and tell people on this whole site that there is no such thing as anothers religon.

    I love those who try to have the last word because they are just so angered by words. It shows me how weak they really are.

    I love those who I offend through the power of bashing most politcal figures such as our president, or our government that isn't the greatest in the world.

    I love those who are offended by all religous bashing.


    I love those who are offended period over writing...


    (ITS VERY FUCKING SIMPLE PEOPLE DON'T READ THE ENTIRE THING, AND IF YOUR THAT FED UP WITH IT, WHY MUST YOU FEEL THE NEED TO COMMENT ON SOMETHING YOU DON'T LIKE, JUST CLICK THAT LITTLE BACK BUTTON ON THE TOP OF YOUR SCREEN.)




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      who doesnt love an idiot? it makes all of us geniuses by comparison.

    but yeah, the site has severely gone down. thats okay. if everyone just wanted to get comments just like a handjob, there are plenty of other sites out there that would appeal to someone who were so inclined.

    if all we really wanted was a dozen comments a day, then we dont really have any business here do we? for me though, i just stick around for the tiny bits of connection between me and the world, i dont depend on it wholeheartedly, but it somehow balances me out. the trick is in weeding out the phonies, the bullsh.it, the pseudo-intellectuality and the bells and whistles and i get the tiny "fix" or "kick" i get out of this old site that has certainly seen better days.

    nostalgia. remember the good ol' days?


    and one more thing, i love being an idiot. it makes everyone else dumber by comparison.


    peace.
    | Posted on 2007-09-24 00:00:00 | by Pietro | [ Reply to This ]
      There used to be a boy around here called "FosterKid." He aroused a whole controversy about the lack of comment on his writes. It was a sheer chaos. Everyone went berserk because then he would harass people and muck up their sites. He would copy a random page from any given website and paste it as a critique. As I said, it was madness.

    This piece unavoidably brings to mind Fosterkid and some of his writings. I never despised him nor hate him. I could even relate to some of his claims. One of the things he mentioned was

    “Somehow, spending an hour to write something and getting 2 or 3 views with 1 comment in a given week no longer appealed to me."

    And it's true you know ... that's not a lie, nor a secret nor an evil remark... that's the downright truth.

    I used to spend time posting stuff on the forum saying what I felt but it was useless.... I remember that once I posted

    “Little by little getting more discouraged by this site.

    I guess the primal objective of its author is not longer being followed. It’s just a shame that people are so exceedingly inclined to praise the allegedly skilful writers rather than help those who pursue improvement"

    All in all, what trying to say, very inarticulately, is that I feel the same way as to many issues you point out. And that is not a matter of praising or bushing what you wrote. I guess that it's a matter of agreeing and disagreeing with it. Moreover, I believe that we are not the only one that feel this way I’ve read that Martin S. Allen is quite upset on this account as well. I hope he doesn’t mind my having mentioned his name here. I surmise that is for a good cause. There might be others... I’m sure ….

    What I don't make out neither concur with is that you go ballistic when people make negative comments on your work. In my case, if you don't mind my saying so, I don't get angry if people loathe my writes and tell me about it as long as they do it respectfully.

    In the same vein, I understand that some people can be callous and I hope that through what you have written they can be more carefully of what they write so as not to hurt anybody’s feeling.

    And please don't tell me that I did not read the whole writing because I did so.


    Wishing you well,



    Ethan



    | Posted on 2007-09-18 00:00:00 | by Ethan Brody | [ Reply to This ]
      
    Right on.

    I understand and agree, but I'm sure that's not what you wanted to hear.

    Should I insult you instead?


    -Cassi-
    | Posted on 2007-09-18 00:00:00 | by LongPastDead | [ Reply to This ]
      This rant just may turn me on to someone of your work. I love contraversial writes. This lil shindig belonged in your journal....it sounds like something you would scream in a telephone or at a meeting. But you chose to make it one of your writes and I can't really see anyone complimenting this....unless of course..they didn't read it all the way through


    -MyX
    | Posted on 2007-09-18 00:00:00 | by MyX | [ Reply to This ]



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