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    dots Submission Name: Givedots
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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 76
    Class/Type: Poetry/Serious
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    dotsGivedots
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    Flames on me
    Give me the flames my friends have
    I take it
    Die die die
    Give me it!!!!
    I am the strength that no else wants
    Love is me
    Love is death with me
    Lets go
    Get me that death and that love
    I take it all
    I am one
    One with you all
    You all who donít want it
    Give it to me
    Let me die with it
    Lord see me





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