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    dots Submission Name: Pray Childdots
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    Author: BrokenNexava
    ASL Info:    19/female/Fort Spire
    Elite Ratio:    3.96 - 27/12/10
    Words: 205
    Class/Type: Poetry/Legend
    Total Views: 147
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 1300



    Description:
       just a poem I did for D&D, Monk turning evil and that kinda thing. But it was fun, I really like thin one.


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    Pray my child, he said to me,
    Safe from harm in his temple
    He paced the corridors never ending.
    Left to play God for a people
    Whose temperance for living had ended.

    My soul so innocent, always the good one they loved.

    Pray young one, he called to me,
    Hidden from the world he loved
    Lost in the halls of forever.
    Taken to be a king for a people
    To whom he’ll be an idol.

    Untainted by the violence, it lasts forever.

    Pray dear daughter, he cried to me,
    The doors of his sanctuary flung open
    Violated by those he cared for.
    Trying to save them even now
    The people who’d kill him.

    Growing up with no family, knew I’d hate them.

    Pray lost one, he pleaded of me,
    Stretched across his precious alter
    Forsaken pains to accost for.
    Made to par-take in their rites
    Those who loved him once.

    The shadows my only friends, why leave them now.

    Pray damned one, he accused of me,
    Bled in his hallow halls
    Screams now fill the air.
    Killed to plaicapait their lust,
    Those lost in the dark.

    I was always darkness, no god can change me.




    Submitted on 2007-09-18 12:50:23     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Wow! I loved it have to have it. Perfection. Making me want to save the world and stop what I'm doing. Beautiful word usage and the flow, well, let's just say I loved it.
    | Posted on 2007-09-25 00:00:00 | by deranged shadow | [ Reply to This ]



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