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    dots Submission Name: ALIENS!!!!!dots
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    Author: Sharati_hottie
    ASL Info:    20/ Female / MICHIGAN
    Elite Ratio:    4.02 - 86/81/90
    Words: 144
    Class/Type: Poetry/What is
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    dotsALIENS!!!!!dots
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    "The aliens have taken me" is what he says
    I don't believe u is what's going thu my head
    "They really, really, have" is what he tells
    "Prove it, I don't believe you are well"
    "The aliens, they did stuff" he said
    "That is why I left my bed"
    "Why are you doing this to me?"
    "You sound as though you aren't free"
    "You make me think you are very ill"
    "You and I both know you have had your fill"
    There are no Aliens, is all I think
    then he shows the lines in ink
    He shows me the writing that isn't known
    I tell him to quit making up his own
    language to scare me it isn't funny
    Then into a trance he goes to spite me
    He speaks of what has happened to "them"
    Maybe the Aliens have really taken him.




    Submitted on 2007-09-18 22:03:37     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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