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    dots Submission Name: Analyses of Lovedots
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    Author: BlazeFlamme
    ASL Info:    22/m/TX
    Elite Ratio:    1.81 - 23/160/138
    Words: 120
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsAnalyses of Lovedots
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    Ownership is a false perception
    Loss does not exist
    The pain from a loss
    Is merely illusionary
    So if I can fix my mind
    Can I fix my pain
    Or rather realize
    That I truly have none

    What of abstractions
    Love can't be touched
    It cannot be measured
    It cannot be stolen
    Can it be lost
    Love I had for dad
    Can he still love
    Or did it fade with his grave

    It can be hard to smile
    Alone in "my" bed
    Shards left in my heart
    From when my dad was found dead
    Ownership insinuates some control
    But love assumes none
    Different lonelinesses are expected
    Everyone needs someone

    But all my wounds will heal with time.




    Submitted on 2007-09-19 01:05:11     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    | Posted on 2015-07-28 00:00:00 | by happymoon | [ Reply to This ]
      Heh, emotion is hard to reckon through logic. I'm sorry. I can't even imagine how hard this must be for you.
    | Posted on 2007-09-19 00:00:00 | by erynofthewood | [ Reply to This ]
      I like it and i feel for you man...he was a good person...and it was sad to see him go...but yes i think that he loves you very much...and there is no need to worry about it because i beleave in God and i know that you will see him again some day. I hope that you find peace and happiness again.
    | Posted on 2007-09-19 00:00:00 | by InYuco Katan | [ Reply to This ]


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