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    dots Submission Name: For a Rainy Daydots
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    Author: AptPupilofLife2
    ASL Info:    18/M/Berkeley,CA
    Elite Ratio:    6.79 - 113/131/48
    Words: 86
    Class/Type: Poetry/Friendship
    Total Views: 153
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 534



    Description:
       This used to be on my old account, but since they deleted that account, I wanted to keep it around . . .

    once again, dedicated to Louise Rose, and anyone else who needs it.


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    dotsFor a Rainy Daydots
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    May this,
    in its kiss,
    bestow a touch of bliss . . .
    i will listen to what you say.
    About you I care,
    each and every day.
    I'll be there.
    My greatest fear,
    is you're no longer here.
    Luck was with me,
    i met someone heavenly.
    Before you cross the line,
    find a number,
    that happens to be mine.
    Give it a ring!
    My spirit will soar . . .
    My voice will sing . . .
    There are people like you,
    A minute more.




    Submitted on 2007-09-19 02:31:10     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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