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    dots Submission Name: Who Are You?dots
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    Author: eggshells
    ASL Info:    27/M/VA
    Elite Ratio:    3.24 - 23/54/57
    Words: 158
    Class/Type: Poetry/Religious
    Total Views: 190
    Average Vote:    No vote yet.
    Bytes: 908



    Description:
       badass
    not really
    but fuck you


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    dotsWho Are You?dots
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    I am the one who watched your kids
    I am the one who you don't speak of
    I am the one who opens lids
    and lets out the ugly doves

    So who are you?
    Tell me who are you?
    Tell me why i should listen
    But not what to do

    I am who makes all the rules
    I am who you can call a god
    I am who that teaches fools
    and makes you feel good as I nod

    And who are you?
    Yeah, who are you?
    Yeah, what's your name?
    oh, what do you do?

    I heard of a man
    Oh so tall
    He had few fans
    and ruled all

    And you killed Him
    I saw you
    Yes you did
    What to do?
    Oh what to do?
    Now I know
    Yes, I know
    Oh, now I know you.

    End
    fin fin fin

    eggshells-






    Submitted on 2007-09-19 12:51:06     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      Interesting...

    not sure what to say about this. I"m assumeing the last part is refering to christ. Uh...judgeing by your equally...interesting description, i guess I wasn't wrong in getting a sense of a semi angry tone to it.

    I'm not even sure if the poem ridicules the "god" in your peice, or the people he watches over...maybe both.

    I was a little confused but i figure, judgeing by your warm description and feeling of the poem, I should stay away to avoid becomeing a target of your anger
    | Posted on 2007-09-20 00:00:00 | by nomad knight | [ Reply to This ]


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