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    dots Submission Name: In Short( Do You Love Me?)dots
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    Author: AeThe Lost Poet
    ASL Info:    19/M/DE
    Elite Ratio:    3.6 - 147/184/122
    Words: 58
    Class/Type: Poetry/Depressed
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    dotsIn Short( Do You Love Me?)dots
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    So you win, I spill my guts,
    Kill the stain in spot,
    Question the blade you are in me,
    You make my wounds clot,
    But now you are not here,
    So who am I to be?
    The only question I never asked
    Is do you ....?

    In short, I love you,
    I hate to say goodbye….




    Submitted on 2007-09-19 13:46:36     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      I think this may be the one you spoke about that has a similar message to my "Have you Told Anyone About Us?" isn't it?
    I remember reading this quite awhile back because it stood out.
    Gee! Thinking about it now, I hope I didn't rip you off! lol.
    have a great day!
    anna
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    | Posted on 2008-02-21 00:00:00 | by amrslamr | [ Reply to This ]
      Thats sweet. I've found myself asking that. Good write
    | Posted on 2007-09-20 00:00:00 | by Katlord | [ Reply to This ]


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