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    dots Submission Name: magic eyesdots
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    Author: anile2
    ASL Info:    29/F
    Elite Ratio:    5.75 - 20/19/6
    Words: 198
    Class/Type: Poetry/Love
    Total Views: 103
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       I absolutley love a persons eyes...It really is the first thing I notice on someone...It was eyes...that attracted me to my husband...I still to this day can melt in his eyes...so you guessed it..a tribute to those baby blues i fell in love with over 15 years ago!!!


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    I love your smiling eyes. They pull me in without any escape. Those big beautiful eyes twinkle at me when you are being silly. I can't help but to be captured by their luster.

    Those blue gems sparkle at me when you tell me you love me. All I have to do is take one look in them and know how much you mean it. I would say you have magic eyes.

    Oh those eyes...oh those eyes...I wish you could see what i see starring back at me. they hold a hope and truth that only soul mates understand.

    Like a sail boat lost at sea, I am at your mercy. Waves of passion could drown me forever in just one blink. I see a far off island of sanctuary looking at me.

    I swear you have magic eyes. They cast a spell. Im in a trance. I'm lost in this binding magic you have over me. I dont want to be freed.

    I love those eyes. Like that fuzzy big blanket we embracingly cuddle up in..they wrap me up. I feel warm, content, and safe when those magic eyes look at me.




    Submitted on 2007-09-19 15:27:28     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Eyes are the window to the soul.
    I always feel bad because everyone always tells me I have beautiful eyes, but that they are too sad. I am happy and I am still asked why I look so sad.
    When I am actually sad and happen to look in a mirror, it looks so miserable it hurts more - funny, that is. Funny, queer, odd.

    Best of luck in your marriage.
    Reading this didn't make me go, "WOW!" but it was nice to hear your thoughts.
    | Posted on 2007-09-27 00:00:00 | by Mandolin | [ Reply to This ]



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