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    dots Submission Name: Self Pity is a Waste.dots
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    Author: xXCptn_SephyXx
    ASL Info:    22/f/PA
    Elite Ratio:    2.65 - 46/119/104
    Words: 73
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
    Total Views: 695
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    Description:
       My message: Everyone must stop the self pity and use your life to make others happy. Don't be selfish. Be generous.


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    dotsSelf Pity is a Waste.dots
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    What is this life for?
    I will tell you.
    Happiness to others.
    And nothing more.

    Realize that when life passes by,
    You can not help,
    But live and sigh.

    Think of your soul as a tool.
    A tool to aid others,
    And not yourself.

    Give up your own content feelings;
    Pass it down to another.
    For life is too short to die--
    In the shadows of death and remorse.




    Submitted on 2007-09-20 11:31:51     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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    ||| Comments |||
      What a lovely and positive message.

    I've always thought that nothing makes a person happier than making someone else happy.

    You kind of echo that with this piece.

    I think you did a lovely job.
    | Posted on 2007-09-20 00:00:00 | by Raivn | [ Reply to This ]


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