Writingpoetry

[ Join Free! ]
(No Spam mail)

dotsdots
nav
  • Join Us
  • Writings
  • ES Magazine
  • Shoutbox
  • Community
  • Digg Mashup
  • Mp3 Search
  • Online Education
  • Video Tutorials
  • RolePlay
  • 90% off Amazon
  • Funny Pics
  • nav



    nav
  • Role Play
  • Piano Music
  • Free Videos
  • Web 2.0
  • nav



    << | >>
    poetry


    dots Submission Name: Civiliandots
    --------------------------------------------------------





    Author: ladyofshalott
    ASL Info:    18/f/somewheregone
    Elite Ratio:    8 - 3/3/7
    Words: 101
    Class/Type: Poetry/
    Total Views: 68
    Average Vote:    1.0000
    Bytes: 750



    Description:
       Well, I think you get my drift....


    Make the font bigger!! Double Spacing Back to recent posts.

    dotsCiviliandots
    -------------------------------------------


    Civilian




    Oh how lovely it must be
    To have the peace of luxury
    No mind to worry of poverty
    Ignorance of diversity
    "Unique" a term of calamity
    Life of civil sincerity
    Prayers and money a piety
    Recognition to one deity
    Schedule, the true reality
    Love, a faken rarity
    As people slave for luxury
    While living morbid poverty
    It matters not diversity
    or sin of true calamity
    The governments in "sincerity"
    Running rich in piety
    Sitting as their "deity"
    Blind to harsh reality
    Charity truly rarity
    Oh how hard this life must be
    In a world of harmony




    Submitted on 2007-09-20 13:06:41     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
    Submissions: [ Previous ] [ Next ]

    Rate This Submission

    1: >_<
    2: I dunno...
    3: meh!
    4: Pretty cool
    5: Wow!




    ||| Comments |||
      nice poem, i liked the way you rhymed it, i think it worked well, it gives it a sarcastic tone somehow, well i thought so. i can relate and agree with a lot of points included in your poem ,the goverment who do what ever they want with us, and religion another form of oppression, love a faken rarity, unfortunately for some.slaving for luxury, us married people can relate to that. nice poem, good thoughts
    take care
    gerry
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by eyeless in gaza | [ Reply to This ]



    Full Anime Episodes Streaming Free
    5 million youtube videos all rated over 4.7 stars with 40+ ratings

    [ Copy this | Start New | Full Size ]

    Google
     

    [ Chrispian ] [ Write Forum ]
    [ Friends ] [ SNESroms ] .
    poetry

    dotsLogindots

    User Name:

    Password:

    [ Quick Signup ]
    [ Lost Password ]


    January 10 07
    131,497 Poems
    Posted

    I have 14,000+ Subscribers on Youtube. See my Video Tutorials

    [ Angst Poetry ]
    [ Cutters ]
    [ Famous Poetry ]
    [ Poetry Scams ]



    FontSize:
    [ Smaller ] [ Bigger ]
     Poetry
    This user has been inactive for more than 5 days.