Tomorrow's Yesterday by Peggy Paris

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Submission Name: Tomorrow's Yesterday dots

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Author:	Peggy Paris
ASL Info:	60/F/USA
Elite Ratio:	4.13 - 721/554/166
Words:	90

Class/Type:	Poetry/Nostalgia
Total Views:	109
Average Vote:	4.0000
Bytes:	564

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Tomorrow's Yesterday dots

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Today was just tomorrow's yesterday,
But time can always seem to find a way
To toss into a pile of disarray
What seemed to be the future yesterday.

How wonderful it is to simply see
A blossom with a buzzing honeybee
And savor for a moment how carefree
that instant seems to come and then to flee.

What is a wait now worth if not a chance
To take another look around perchance,
To play a lovely tune and simply dance,
And treasure living, loving, and romance!

Submitted on 2007-09-20 22:56:04 Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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||| Comments |||
  This was such a lovely piece!
The rhyming pattern was greatly interesting,
and the poem speaks the truth!
Why waste your life waiting for something,
when days that you don't even notice fly by.
The title and the concept of 'tomorrow is yesterday' is absolutely amazing.
I loved this piece.
Sweet and charming but had a point.
Fabulous write :]
| Posted on 2007-09-27 00:00:00 | by roses | [ Reply to This ]
  Delightful! "Life is in the living" is an old country saying out in the High Plains, and there's a lot of truth in it!

'Today was just tomorrow's yesterday'

Clever!!

This is a great lighthearted rhyming poem with a lot of philisophical wisdom included! Nice work!
| Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by Ron Cole | [ Reply to This ]
  Nice thoughts portrayed in this little life's lesson Sharon. In line #1 you forgot the 's on tomorrow.
| Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by ErgoIgo | [ Reply to This ]
  This is so true Sharon
We as a race need to reralize we only have one life to live
Why waste it never enjoying the beauty of nature and the beauty of the life in front of us
One does have to take chances to move forward in life
We must remember taking a chance is a no lose situation as if it was a mistake we learn from that mistake
I really like how you include nature in a lot of your writes as I too have a Love affair with nature
Her beauty never ceases to amaze me
Excellent job
Looking forward to reading more from you soon
God Bless
Ron
| Posted on 2007-09-20 00:00:00 | by Ronswords | [ Reply to This ]

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