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    dots Submission Name: Provocationdots
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    Author: bonita2689
    ASL Info:    18/f/in
    Elite Ratio:    3.86 - 42/58/33
    Words: 77
    Class/Type: Poetry/Romance
    Total Views: 91
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    dotsProvocationdots
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    Your spitting devils
    And I’m trying to resist
    You’ve caught the measure
    Of my coy sharp lips

    Demure is my charade
    And you know too well
    The poison that you play
    Is an extraction of hell

    Confusion slants the function
    Of our eccentric love
    A sheer, bewildering upset
    Of banter and the result thereof

    Suspended on my pillow
    You plague my lucid dreams
    A nearly shrill deathblow
    To my once hallowed schemes




    Submitted on 2007-09-20 23:42:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Is this a way of saying that love is overpowering you? At least, that's what I think it is saying. An interesting poem, no doubt, and one that can be left up to plenty of interpretation.

    I like the word "Demure". So sweet and shy, it makes a woman sound even more attractive.

    I liked this poem, even though I'm not totally sure I have grasped its meaning.

    I'm going to add this to my favourites!

    DEMURE!
    | Posted on 2007-09-21 00:00:00 | by manwithnoname | [ Reply to This ]



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