We have enough -------------------------------------------
I came across someone like me
Some one who wants just as much, if not less
I spoke to him
We want what we can have
Yes I want but I cannot grip my love for what I want
I have power to have but I choose to not have it
Is this even reason for this speech?
Am I not worthy of my own thoughts?
Is my own self my own demon?
To be what we want is to be what our own does not want
That is life
That is the devil
So I grant this demon my wishes
Then I grant god my hopes
I fall in between
It destroys me
But I get up
I live another day
I fight all what is bad
I fight for all that is good
Here am I.
This was good, and I think it has a lot of potential. I'm not entirely sure I like those first lines where you're talking about meeting someone just like you, though. It seems like it really had no relevance, when you could just start talking about yourself instead. I think this person needs to be taken out of the poem, or else inserted a bit more into the rest of the poem.
It also felt a bit unorganized. You had a few different subjects going on there, and to me it didn't feel like the transitions were made very well.
This would be pretty good with a bit of polishing.