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    dots Submission Name: Anotherdots
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    Author: Kube
    ASL Info:    24/M/Australia
    Elite Ratio:    1.93 - 64/56/32
    Words: 105
    Class/Type: Poetry/Misc
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    dotsAnotherdots
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    In life we have what we call problems
    I call it shit!
    Shit that comes to us
    Shit that makes us what we are today
    Many say I hate this shit!
    I say bring it the fuck on!
    I was born for this shit!

    What is it really?
    Its just shit
    Shit that take place
    Shit that happens
    Get it done and get over it.

    I see what you see
    I see nothing
    Yet I see so much
    So much in my life
    So much in our lifes
    Lets get it done!
    Lets make it

    Time to die
    Time live
    Remember.




    Submitted on 2007-09-21 07:58:30     Terms of Service / Copyright Rules
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      Pretty angry and raw. I agree with it, buts its missing a point...
    | Posted on 2007-09-23 00:00:00 | by sylvester4 | [ Reply to This ]


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